Under the Saturated Moon (A Sevenling)
Under the Saturated MoonMercurial, bare and light-fingered,you churn nectar as gala applessway from their stem.I fall through your eye ducts,on my back and for your equations. Although soaked to our...
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hey Y - lovely writing, as usual. very sensual. I suppose, underlying the sensual language, you sort of have a consistent action going on. The apples swaying, a falling, and an equation. I can't help...
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Thank you, Ryan.Ashes to ashes, dust to dust..The last of my make-up that istangibly human should be dust.Yoly
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Yolee,Every time I hear the word apple, my mandibules pop to attention. I start chomping with libertine exhilaration & poetic license (yes, I paid my $7.00... lol) and transformed the sevenling...
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Splendid! We should team up.Thank you, Russia.Yoly
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'bare and light-fingered,you churn nectar as gala applessway from their stem.'Lovely, Yolee. I love the tender voice very much.
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